One of my concerns was the counterarguments. Today I did a little more research and found out some of the specific adverse reactions that can occur with vaccination and added a nice paragraph about it to my paper. I was also worried about cohesiveness. I haven't really done anything specifically to address that problem, but it seems like my flow isn't as bad as I originally thought. I think my next step will be to go through all of my transition and make sure they are effective.
Effective Websites
http://health.utah.gov/
http://www.cougardental.com/
http://www.miessociety.org/
http://jackjohnsonmusic.com/home
Ineffective Websites
http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/alexander_fleming_and_penicillin.htm
http://www.greatbuildings.com/architects/Ludwig_Mies_van_der_Rohe.html
http://www.bc.edu/bc_org/avp/cas/fnart/fa267/mies.html
http://burleylions.org/spudman.html
I think one big design thing is empty space and how you use it. Size and placement of text is huge too.
Jack Johnson.. mmmmm.. haha good choice! I clicked on one of you're ineffetive links and I agree,design is a big deal. It needs to be appealing to the eye. That one looked like the creator was color blind.
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