Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Peer Review Changes and Favorite Movies

1) There are a few places that I will combine sentences.
2) I will reword the sentences my peer reviewers said were awkward or unclear.
3) I will take a closer look at my conclusion and try and make it crystal clear.

These are some of my favorite movies
-The Emperor's New Groove
-Ever After
-The Incredibles
-National Treasure
-The Fugitive
-Sneakers
-Insurrection
-White Christmas
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3 comments:

  1. karilynn.February 22, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    EVER AFTER > every other Cinderalla movie. Good Choice.

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  2. AvarieFebruary 24, 2012 at 7:33 AM

    Ever After is most definitely a classic! I also love National Treasure and The Fugitive, those are always favorites for family movie nights at my house haha.

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  3. KennedyFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Ever After!! Everyone was thinking the same thing I was, I think I want to add it to my favorite movies! I haven't seen three of these movies so thank you for the suggestions! :)

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